"...she did not want to know whether it was claws or teeth which had sunk into her flesh." - well if my D&D knowledge serves, I'd take the bite. No risk of paralysis.
This was a nice and fast-paced piece of fantasy action. Ghouls are one my favorite fictional baddies. I agree with what someone else said: definitely needs 2 parts (or 3... or 7)
I forgot about that. At the time, I would have taken the claws cuz I didn't remember that.
Really glad you enjoyed it. Yes there is more, but from his perspective. I might turn this into the prologue. It'll hopefully be around 10k words, if I can do it in time for the Feb 17th SaS prompt, if not then I'll still write it.
Thank you. Welcome aboard, glad to have you, and hope you enjoy your stay for as long as you're here.
"...she did not want to know whether it was claws or teeth which had sunk into her flesh." - well if my D&D knowledge serves, I'd take the bite. No risk of paralysis.
This was a nice and fast-paced piece of fantasy action. Ghouls are one my favorite fictional baddies. I agree with what someone else said: definitely needs 2 parts (or 3... or 7)
I forgot about that. At the time, I would have taken the claws cuz I didn't remember that.
Really glad you enjoyed it. Yes there is more, but from his perspective. I might turn this into the prologue. It'll hopefully be around 10k words, if I can do it in time for the Feb 17th SaS prompt, if not then I'll still write it.
Thank you. Welcome aboard, glad to have you, and hope you enjoy your stay for as long as you're here.
Just got done reading this, hope there's a part 2 coming up!
Thank you so much! IThat means a lot.
There is, but he is the main character this time, and I want it to be for the sword and Saturday Feb prompt. Gotta start working in that actually. . .
Cool, I can't wait to read his story.
I have a general idea of what it is about, but not sure whether it'll be lighter in tone than this or not.
Well let the story write itself and we'll see X)
That would be best. And if I can't make it 10k words I'll just post it.
Eh, things like 10k words is a guideline, not a law or anything just write the best story you can
And you as well.