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M Le Baron's avatar

You created more in ten paragraphs than most writers I have encountered would create in the same number of chapters. Your fragment was clear, compelling and enticing — a small jewel box of prose with a distinct aura of antiquity, a clear call to revel in detailed worldbuilding and a the promise of a whopping good yarn.

More fragments, please.

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The Brothers Krynn's avatar

Loved the ending, it adds to Astrid's character I think when it comes to these simpler tales you do a great job Harold.

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