You created more in ten paragraphs than most writers I have encountered would create in the same number of chapters. Your fragment was clear, compelling and enticing — a small jewel box of prose with a distinct aura of antiquity, a clear call to revel in detailed worldbuilding and a the promise of a whopping good yarn.
Thank you so much, that is high praise! I do have three others, I think my fist might be better than the other two. But I am currently working on the rest of the story for this one to publish on Substack, though that might be a few months to go, hopefully not too long.
You created more in ten paragraphs than most writers I have encountered would create in the same number of chapters. Your fragment was clear, compelling and enticing — a small jewel box of prose with a distinct aura of antiquity, a clear call to revel in detailed worldbuilding and a the promise of a whopping good yarn.
More fragments, please.
Thank you so much, that is high praise! I do have three others, I think my fist might be better than the other two. But I am currently working on the rest of the story for this one to publish on Substack, though that might be a few months to go, hopefully not too long.