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The Brothers Krynn's avatar

Short and sweet, and yet there's something ethereal here. I like the turns of phrase and the overall tone.

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Harold Ember's avatar

Thanks, glad you liked it! I decided against leaving the ending open and had her do something, and did tone it down a little to make it a little more of a wholesome read lol.

Just a heads up, if I don't reply to a comment, its because I didn't know it was there. I haven't been getting notifications for comments or likes even though it is turned on.

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The Brothers Krynn's avatar

I know right? I’ve had that problem a year ago, a guy kept quote-restacking the dialogue and descriptions he liked. I loved seeing him do that, I can’t remember who it was and yet it meant the world to me. Notifications never informed me when he did it. Since I’ve lost track of him, it’s crushed me.

So I totally get how it is.

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Harold Ember's avatar

Dang, that sucks.

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