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Nov 29, 2023·edited Nov 29, 2023Liked by Harold Ember

I always wondered if others had created 'Mr Mad' like entities who watch various worlds unfold. I guess so. And I am left with more questions about the Suff...

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I'm afraid I don't know what Mr Mad is, but I do think that The Watcher might be the narrator for The Waterfall; I might have to update and/or repost it. I hope I haven't caused too much confusion with my version of The Suff.

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Not at all. The Watcher sounds like an interesting character.

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Nov 29, 2023·edited Nov 29, 2023Author

Good, I'm glad. Thanks.

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I like this take on The Suff

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Thank you. I'm glad you do. I was a bit worried when I was writing and posting it that it was too different. I guess not lol.

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For a little while there, I thought that perhaps...

Well, maybe I shouldn't say. I wouldn't want to spoil the surprise for others who haven't yet read.

And if you haven't, you should read this one. It's a brisk and rather unique take on The Suff.

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Thanks. I'm curious to know what you were going to say. . .

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Now that it's buried under replies, I was going to say that I began this wondering if we were getting a narration from the point of view of the Suff itself. Not what ended up happening, of course, but very interesting that it gave off that initial vibe.

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Hmm. I like this idea. That is interesting. I want to see it now.

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This was a great entry to The Suff.

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Thank you! I hope it isn't too different.

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Nah. You're good. Half the fun is seeing where people take The Suff.

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