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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

Pacing, pacing, pacing. I was gearing up for a mass ground assault and it never coalesced. Image my dissappointment. :) It was a great start to what could have been a great short story.

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Harold Ember's avatar

I'm sorry about that my friend, perhaps I shall finish what was started. . . Though, I am glad you thought it was a great start, thank you!

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