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Great, Ill use it for Fictional Friday!

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Thanks!

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No problem

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" Inventors, designers, and engineers now held the real sway; politicians, military dictators, and the like were almost forgotten in this era of technology where as much flesh was done away with as could be."

That is a very interesting concept and made me think about AIs as a pattern of political power.

I really enjoyed reading this, thank you!

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I'm glad you liked it and got some thought out of it. It wasn't really supposed to be a commentary, but I do think that if technology advanced like this, the ones in power or with power wouldn’t be our usual politicians.

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Love that, Stayin Alive” 💜👍

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Thanks!

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That's why you always need an off switch.

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Dang it, if I had thought of that myself I coulda had a really cheesy line at the end.

I was laughing when I read this comment yesterday, thank you!

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"She smiled a big smile that flashed perfectly straight, snow-white teeth." Any time the word teeth is used to describe someone's smile, you know there's something in them that's evil.

Also, great detail about Staying Alive playing - what a lovely song for a massacre.

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I'm quite proud of that song bit, actually. Glad someone noticed. ;)

I've never realized that about teeth but you're right.

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